If a thousand waves kissed the shore

A short poem I wrote for someone I dearly love<3

If a thousand waves kissed the shore,

Yours would be the one that feels like home.

You're the warmth the winter waits for,

The pulse that beats within my soul.

The November rush could never capture,

The way your love feels like a quiet rapture,

When my steps falter, adrift in dark,

Your light of a million suns,

Would rekindle my spark.

Your the hush that lives,

In the morning mist,

The soft beginning,

The sun can't resist.

Author's Note

Looking for ways to improve and I feel like this poem could've been structured better... So I'm open to your thoughts ☆

Reviews

[Zoa]

Too good that i am lost at words...the way you used nature's beauty to express your love is truly amazing. Also, this poem is perfect as it was written by what you were feeling at that and no one can structure this better than you. So keep writing, hoping to read more.

[Saki]

I am not knowledgeable to give you advice on how to improve, but I really enjoyed reading it..to love and be loved like this indeed would feel splendid