Parallel Confusion

Unlock a world of possibilities

       A door echoes the sound of dreams
                    Two worlds blend in eternal fire
                        Pure sorrows manipulate the darkness
                                Music slumbers the chaos
                              Stars luster the teachings of wisdom
                           Ashes lightly splatter the moons
                  Clouds secretly remain
               Footsteps burn the elderly dawn

                 Destiny plagues an unearthly angel

                        Impossibilities in a guided sanctuary

                           Imagination reflects reality

                                 Leaving the realm of non-existence  

Author's Note

I hope this is decent :S
It's a little confusing but that's the whole point
the world of fantasy is confusing :S

Reviews

[Max]

Well, if the point is to be confusing, then it's successful :P It's very random and all over the place, which fits with the theme of fantasy and imagination. A creative person's thoughts are often very scattered, and this is why many of us are so bad at being organized :P

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very nice.

[Ruth]

Brilliantly so! lol
Great piece love..truly surreal and thought provoking, love it! xx

[Eric Cox]

Very cool. Imagery is awesome. Each line is different and created nicely.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

love it :)

[E.V. Black]

Yep, it really doesn't make that much sense. None of the sentences' topics are related to one another, even if read through twice. Honestly, I liked this. The structure and the undecided topic are very refreshing. Very ingenious. :D
Thanks for suggesting this to me!

[solitare]

Beautiful imagery... great use of structure and colour! Each line is full of depth and wonder :)

[Raven Starhawk]

First of all I like how you formatted this. ^^* Its certainly something that I have to read twice and really try to understand. But as you stated "the world of fantasty is confusing" and that is the truth.

[~ Moonlight ~]

You have mastered true poery! Good Job!

[Helpless]

inspiration!

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Great Work