No Escape

The darkness, the black, the silence deafening as it pulls you, claws you, tears you apart

You scream for help but nothing, silence, no words escape you lips

You can't escape it, the blackness, the horror, the terror that's inside you

You can't get away, though you try, how you try, try so desperately to escape

How can you escape? How can you escape something so dark that clings to you, that owns you, that's inside you?

You can't escape, you can't get away. How could could you get away? How is it possible? Is it possible?

Is it possible to escape yourself? 

Author's Note

All feedback is appreciated

Reviews

[junaid altaf]

well i think respecting your emotions is the key.........
and why try to escape when anything is possible!!!!!!!!!

[Antonio Valentino]

ohhh.. nice ending! Is it possible? Thats a great question.. i guess it depends on a lot of things.. you really nailed it though.. most of our problems our things we project on others about ourselves.. enjoyed this! :)

[Ban Heo]

your lips* 2nd line.
4th line repeats try a little too much.
And the two lines in this poem is a bit too direct for poetry. Other than that, I think you have some good imagery and a very clear authorial voice. Keep it up.