Where Are You Now?

something I threw together last night. I hope everyone likes it

 I admit your kiss
Still knocks me off my legs.
The sweet joy of your smile
Still makes me want to melt

I give i give 
All that i have left
And you gave me, you gave me 
Some glimering hope
So where are you now?

You forget your words
Still pierce right through my chest
Your gaze 
Still makes me want to try

I give I give 
All that I have left
And you gave me, you gave me
Some glimering hope
So where are you now?

Have you forgotten
What you mean to me
Sometimes it seems
I am a whisper to you

I give I give
All that I have left
And you gave me, you gave me
Some glimering hope
So where are you now?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jacqueline]

This sounded like a song, despite having no rhyme scheme.
I really liked it.

Its message is somewhat inspiring.
Good read.