Wanted no more~

 

As I lay here,

With my closed wide eyes

 Listening,

To the soft summer rain, cry.

Shushing me with, lullabies.

 

I purge the puddles, of history

Of all the years, for they were only once days.

 

This distant air,

 Between our naked bodies.

Once basked in the summer heat,

setting the sheets ablaze.

Now covers, from the winter chill,

That expands across, the empty sheets.

This unwanted demon of end

Takes his time, to thicken the fog.

Inside my mind

Leaving my eyes to weep

My heart to bleed.

My body to want.

 

For there is no connection,

Even though we breathe together.

We exhale apart.

Author's Note

Lighting , Loud and fierce woke me from a dream. It was 3am...
I will re-read this now it's 5am in a bit, maybe I can catch some more sleep!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Your words are true. Two people can be together for the wrong reasons. The emotion of love had faded away. I like how you told the poem. The ending made the purpose of the poem complete. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[SpokenWord]

I think this one is very well done from the first verse to the last you capture that lost desired and thirst to feel it again. So many lovers lose the magic of love because of time, lack of communication or trying to control it when love is all natural and to hold onto sexuality between each other they must always feed each other or it will starve and dwindle away.

[Brad]

this is your most heart-wrenching yet, wow

[Larry Dyson]

you are developing...evolving as a prose writer...your flowing emotions and style are developing into a smooth transition between words and emotions....I like this new you..would you try one without any rhyme in it ,...please?...lightening...one of the goddess power sources...thunder and lightening...
what about.."As I lay here,

With my eyes, wide closed....

Listening,

To the soft summer rain;...

cry

Shushing me with, ...

Lullabies. "