A little piece of me

Creative Poetry Challenge

Once her eyes

were opened

to the magic

that could flow.

Her feisty words

could no longer withhold.

For she is no longer trapped inside

her hell.

 

Her wildest imagination starts to bloom- 

OH the vivid colors that scramble around~

Searching these pleasing images, 

that play inside her mind.

She  now enjoys the fierce thoughts,

that will unfold 

from the pen she holds.

 

Mischievousness!!

Dances around her smile, 

Sparkling  down on the paper,

She now writes upon.

 

For she knows it’s him she will never deny, 

she needs to devour

 this lust the only way she knows how.

 

Her bold stubborn heart, has a tale to tell.

Written from her alluring sultry mind.

 

For  she  has a

 young soul 

laying  hidden underneath

 the old and aging

 skin 

full of seduction

just for him.

So she waits,

Patiently!

 Seducing her prey 

with the magic flowing out of her pen.

In the end, it's her pen who wins.

This tale of love~

A beast is a beast after all in the end.

No mater how lovely she pens, 

the words can not sooth  trickery 

into his eyes~

Author's Note

rough draft......

Reviews

[Benjamin Wright]

I agree with Poetic Beauty about the fact, this certainly does describe vividly about a woman who can't (always) have what she wants. The man she strives for, but can't have at the moment.

I know that from personal experience. But in my case, it was a woman I couldn't have.

I wrote a poem about a woman I was going to marry (10 years ago). But that will never happen. You may read that poem on here. It's in the Poem section in my profile.

This write has waited patiently, and is giving up, we can write till our hearts hurt, someone can fall in lust with what we write,

The words can not sooth Trickery into his eyes~

but we can not make the beast (her) be seen as beauty in his eyes just from her words she writes so well... drawing him into the lustfull game! ... Words start us off, but in the end true attraction to the outside wins over and over again!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to describe a woman who knows what she wants and can't have the man she wants at the moment. She is waiting patiently for the man she longs for.

[Brad]

you are such an artist with words! you impress me with how well you can display your emotions in writing