Motion Sickness

A Poem by

Up and down

Oh how the rollercoaster

Of life is giving me

Motion Sickness.

I close my eyes tight

I prepare for the fight

I'm going up, i feel great

I'm going down, i've reached hells gates.

My emotions are at a peak,

Forgivness is what i seek.

© 2010

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Dr. Robert

I wouldnt have guess you were only 15 years old! This shows an emotion not seen in many poems on this website. This is perhaps the only poem I've read so far that I couldnt nit pick at. It has everything going for it. Short and sweet, much like a rollercoaster. Keep up the awesome work and I look forward to seeing what else you conjure up in future writings!