INTUITION TRUE

The edge was near, yet no one knew it.

What was she to do?

She pushed along, her gut screamed through it,

headlong into gloom.

It tugged at her from deep inside,

a side-glance in the room.

The sudden flinch of lips that lie

engulfed her now like fumes.

Not long until the truth was free,

her intuition true.

So always let your gut speak up,

 Your gut will speak the truth…

Reviews

[Hannah]

Very eerie. If you were trying to build suspense, you sure did it, alright.

[Jacob Clifford]

Very intriguing ... Of course I have very minimal knowledge of this "larger piece", but this poem very strongly sets a tone and established themes. Looking forward to the long-awaited unveiling of your ongoing project.

[M. L. F.]

Perfect!! I hope the tension mounts in the book as well as it seems to be in the poems connected to it... Your interest is very, very much appreciated Clifford, and is serving to fuel the fire all of us writers need. :)

[Parky]

supernatural stuff. hi i am jenisha. nice to meet you.

[PhoenixDown]

Firm believer in this message & I thought the eerie angle you wrote it from was very captivating & enjoyable. Good, solid work.

[M. L. F.]

Thank you very much L. ;) I am trying to build some suspense for the larger piece with a few morsels. This piece reflects one of the main characters "standpoints".. and the piece will make more sense later.. Thanks for the read and the review..
..Misty

[PhoenixDown]

& thank you for the extra info. Misty. ;) I enjoy hearing that. Currently doing the same thing. I am curious to see what is created. Serious writers unite! You are welcome..
..L