It really does read like a song! I'd love to hear you sing it.
Researching the Rocky Mountains I see, as far as the U.S., they are in Montana, Idaho, Wyoming, Colorado, Utah, and New Mexico.
It reads just like you are strolling through. Very nice. Very nice.
Posted 7 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece. I love Springtim.. read moreThank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece. I love Springtime. I wrote it as a song , hope it reads that way.
I adore the wildflowers. I plant the seed of the wildflower in my garden. They expand to all the neighbor's yards too. I miss the warm days of spring already. I live in Michigan. Winter is coming. I love the hope and positive movement of the words. An amazing poem. I did enjoy.
Coyote
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
That's Coyote, l appreciate your wonderful comments and compliments on this song.
Imagine C.. read moreThat's Coyote, l appreciate your wonderful comments and compliments on this song.
Imagine CW McCall singing it.
I live in the mountains and I like the flow of your piece and appreciate wild flowers in springtime....I also like the repetitions and there is a hint of romanticism here as well... I feel as if it's almost a song I could sing (not a good voice!) thank you for sharing!
Warmly, B
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thank you so very much. It is written as a song, l grew up and still live in Utah. Some of the mos.. read moreThank you so very much. It is written as a song, l grew up and still live in Utah. Some of the most beautiful mountains and scenery in the world.
I love Spring and the beautiful flowers that bloom. A romantic time, indeed. Love being is the air, along with soft, yet tender moments. There's something about mountains in the background, that help create such a breathtaking mood.
That last line is so dreamy.
Such a lovely song, Trace. : )
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece, it was fashioned in th.. read moreThank you so much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece, it was fashioned in the form of an old song.
I was truly captivated by this poem. It's a vivid, joyful celebration of nature, from the wildflowers to the mountains and all the wildlife in between. The rhythmic, almost musical flow of the words reminds me of a gentle stream and the changing seasons. As I read it, I felt fully immersed in the beautiful landscape.
Posted 3 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on my poem. Your compliments mean the world to me.. read moreThank you so very much for reading and commenting on my poem. Your compliments mean the world to me.
It really does read like a song! I'd love to hear you sing it.
Researching the Rocky Mountains I see, as far as the U.S., they are in Montana, Idaho, Wyoming, Colorado, Utah, and New Mexico.
It reads just like you are strolling through. Very nice. Very nice.
Posted 7 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Months Ago
Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece. I love Springtim.. read moreThank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece. I love Springtime. I wrote it as a song , hope it reads that way.
A wonderful spring lyric poem. I used to live in NM - lots of dust in spring and not much blooming. I'm in MI now - the daffodils are up, crocus have bloomed, violets, pansies - so many birds. It gives me a lift just like this poem
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments.
I so enjoy watching ever.. read moreThank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments.
I so enjoy watching everything come back to life after a cold bleak winter.
I am a big fan of nature and I dub this piece an excellent tribute to all that is glorious about springtime. Love the descriptions and the vivid imagery your words have drawn. Nicely penned.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much for your excellent comments and wonderful compliments on my writing.
.. read moreThank you so very much for your excellent comments and wonderful compliments on my writing.