All I Need

a love poem

Your heartbeat like a lullaby

Softly echoing my whispered sigh

The tender rush in your embrace

That look of ecstasy upon your face

Sweet wine kisses from moist warm lips

Tickling my chest with your fingertips

These are the things I must concede

That makes me exclaim:

“You’re all I need”

Author's Note

Painting: Romance In Red Lovers by Nik Helbig

Reviews

[Raven]

(Standing and applauding). Laid out like a song, well done.

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for your wonderful compliments and comments on my writing.

Trace

[lovergirl]

waw! i'm speechless infront of your pieces , it makes me go to another world , i truly imagined the picture you're drawing with these words (y) Loveit

[Trace]

Thank you Overturn for your beautiful compliments and comments on this piece.
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Trace

[Trace]

Oops. Forgot to proofread my return comment.
Lovergirl turned into overturn.

[MsJewel]

You are a romantic at heart my friend - just another reason why I adore you. Your poem is stunning.

:) Julie

[Trace]

Thank you sweet lady.
I so appreciate your compliments and inspiration.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Gentle romance....absolutely enchanting, Trace. The emotions are so real. Beautifully written and the painting you chose to accompany your work is gorgeous. Lydi**

[Trace]

Words of encouragement from the master are always inspiring to me.
Thank you my dear friend for your excellent comments and compliments.

Trace

[SyberRose]

My neck is very ticklish haa...but a lovely romantic poem...nicely done...Rose

[Trace]

One has to know just how to take it from a tickle to a tantalizing treat.
Lips are very powerful tools of seduction.

Thanks for the great comments,

Trace

[JayceeC]

The small intimate things you hat say, "I love you" are truly the essentials. Everything else is just extra.

[Trace]

Does a kiss on the neck from behind make you feel the same as the spoken word?
Sometimes actions speak louder than words.
But sometimes we all need to hear that we are more than just loved,
everyone wants to feel needed.

Thank you for your beautiful comments and compliments.

Trace

[Kelly Scheppers]

...are there any lovlier words to whisper in one's ear? I would turn around quickly... and respond in kind!

[Trace]

We can say: "I love you" in so many ways without actually saying: "I love you"
and to get the equal response is all one would ask of a lover.

Thank you my sweet friend.

Trace

[Eugene Finley]

I often imagine feeling these very feelings when holding my woman in my arms. People use the word "love", but this here describes it. Thanks.

[Trace]

What an excellent comment and compliment, Thank you so very much.

Trace

[Dara]

Softly romantic and very tenderly written. Just lovely, Trace!

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your beautiful comments,

Trace

[Matching Socks]

Gorgeous!! Love is not about grand gestures, I wish more men would see this.
It's about those little things. All those little things.
Perfect poem.

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for your great comments on my poetry,
your compliments mean the world to me.

Trace

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome Trace!