Take Me.... (Collaboration by MsJewel and Trace)

Take me to where we can chase sunsets

Whispers of an evening breeze
Leaving footprints in the sand
Waves tickling the sunset shores
Lovers strolling hand in hand

Take me to that special place
Take me where the sunset glows
Take me in your warm embrace
Take me now, please take me now

Twilight beckons from afar
Blending scents of salt and sea
Windblown beams of pure light trace
The soft curve of you and me

Take me to that special place
Take me where the sunset glows
Take me in your warm embrace
Take me now, please take me now

Lovely eyes and the taste of
Luscious lips soft against mine
Chasing sunsets 'cross the sand
Waiting for the moonlight's shine

Take me to that special place
Take me where the sunset glows
Take me in your warm embrace
Take me now, please take me now

Take me love as hand in hand
We'll chase sunsets cross the sand.

Author's Note

a little romantic poem I wrote with my wonderful friend Julie.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

A poem of sweetest romance! I really enjoy the use of nature's beauty here. Well crafted collaboration!

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments.
Greatly appreciated.

Trace

[Trace]

Third place winner in the pair up poetry contest

[Sami Khalil]

An invitation of utter romance that beckons the magical beauty of a place in a warm embrace. We are all tickled to joyful anticipation. An excellent collaboration... :)....................

[Trace]

Thank you Sami for your wonderful comments on this collaboration.
I am so glad you liked it.

Trace

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. .....:).......

[Patricia Wedel]

"Waves tickling the sunset shores"...
shades of sunset purple and gold...
chasing passion in moonlit sighs...
Trace and Julie, you leave me
breathless. truly, Pat

[Trace]

Your lovely comments and compliments mean the world to me.
Thank you so very much.

HUGGS. ... Trace

[Tiana]

Beautiful collaboration as always you two ;) What romatic imagery -- chasing sunsets cross the sand. beautiful :)

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your excellent comments and compliments.

Trace

[TL Boehm]

This would make a wonderful love song, with the repeating lines and the meter - a duet perhaps. Well done.

[Trace]

Thank you my dear friend for your wonderful compliments and comments on our collaboration poem.
read moreThank you my dear friend for your wonderful compliments and comments on our collaboration poem.

Trace

[Ohhhwillow]

Did you write it all together? Or are parts by one or the other? I love the idea of collaborating poetry! And, like this romantic piece, when it works, IT WORKS! Well done

[Trace]

Sometimes it is one way sometimes it is the other.
We work on a poem until we both love it before we post it.
Then hope others like it too.

I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Trace

[gabrielle]

Beautiful, romantic write, Trace.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you for inviting me to write this with you. I love what you did with our words. You always inspire me my dear friend.

Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

Sometimes we all need a little more inspiration that perspiration.
But sweating the details is what I do best.

Thank you for adding the words that finished my thoughts on this piece.
It is always such a pleasure to write with and for you.

HUGGS. . Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Not only romantic, but uplifting and carefree too. Julie and Trace, the two of you have always written wonderful collaborations. The rhyming is perfect and it is impossible to tell who wrote which lines. Loved it! Lydi**

[Trace]

Thank you so very much my dear friend.
It is always such a privilege and pleasure to write with Julie
And is is wonderful to create a poem that others enjoy reading.

Huggs. Trace