Dance with me

Is it a song

Dance With Me

It’s time for us to get away, Get away and play,
Come with me, don’t hesitate,
Let’s get away today,

Run away with me today, Let’s get away from here,
Don’t hesitate, no time to wait,
We’ll escape without a care,

Dance with me, come dance with me,
Swing me round and round,
Dance with me, oh dance with me,
As our toes trace smiles on the ground,

Don’t hesitate, no time to wait, Be mine forever more,
Run away with me, come dance with me,
We’ll dance like never before,

It’s time for us, to get away, Let’s get away and play,
You’re the one for me; it’s plain to see,
Let’s get away today,

Dance with me, come dance with me,
Swing me round and round,
Dance with me, oh dance with me,
As our toes; trace smiles on the ground,

Night or day, let's get away, Under moonlit skies, or sun,
It's plain to see, it's what we need,
Let's go out and have some fun,

Dance with me, and you will see,
Our toes; tracing smiles on the ground,

Dance with me, oh dance with me,
As our toes; trace smiles on the ground

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

this spins with joy and reckless abandon—your words make me feel the floor shake beneath our feet.
Light, playful, but honest; you’ve got a rhythm that sticks in the chest long after the music fades.

[Trace]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and compliments on this piece. I just got it put to music and it's a great song. I will be putting some of my music on Instagram soon.

Trace

[Rosie E C…]

Wow, this is quite compelling.

It’s daring and exciting towards the reader.

An elegant piece, very carefully written.

I sense a joyous, welcoming and a bit of a cheeky vibe to this.

A splendid, energetic read.

[Trace]

I wrote this more as lyrics to a song, and my composer just finished with the music.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this poem.

Trace

[Curly Grace]

Your poem moves with a lightness that’s hard to resist. It’s joyful, rhythmic, and full of that carefree spirit.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much, I am glad you liked it. Every now and then we need something upbeat.

Huggs, Trace

[Brandon Houser]

What a joyful read! You feel like you danced after reading it. :)

[Trace]

Thank you so much, I just had my composer put dance music to it. It will be going on my playlist soon.

Thanks again,
Trace