Timid Beauty

I wrote this very fast without really stopping to think about what I was writing. I guess it's about a girl whom no one knows or bothers trying to get to know because of her physical appearance, but everyone who passes her up is missing out. M'mkay?

Well she ain't got tits
But she ain't no b***h
She's got a quiet, little smile
That makes an appearance once in a while

Well she ain't got s**t
But she's got a lot of love to give
And if you just speak to her
She might just open up for you

Well she ain't no s**t
Her heart beats in the shadows
It's got no one to love
But it's desperately searching

Well she's a shy little girl
No, she ain't no perfection
At least to the eye
But the eye always tells lies

She's got a soul that's never full
But if you're right you just might
Fill it up, then fill her up
If there's a heaven, she's the source of its light

Author's Note

Written quickly for the "Of the other" contest. I'm not as proud of this as my other writings, but whatever.

Reviews

[Dana Shefelbine]

i don't have tits.

:]

i really like this.
it's got a strong message, your writing means something, i love it.

[Katy Otto]

"If there's a heaven, she's the source of its light"
That one hits my heart with a vengeance.