The Shadow

Can anyone say peter pan

The Shadow

It follows me in the light

A never ending stalker

Trying to catch me

Conected

Just like me

 

Author's Note

What you think tell me what i need to do to help it

Reviews

[Jenny]

Interesting...I like it.

[CLUTZ]

i like it, but the line "just like me" doesn't quite sound right. i don't know, maybe its just me. but overall the poem was very good.

[melancholia skies]

I'm not used to reading things like this so excuse me. Anyways,
Nice job, it flowed. There was visionary with it. The stalker part was rather clever, I enjoyed that.