Dreams

i dont realy know

Dreams

Wishes come true.

They are the fantasies of the night.

Never wanting them to end.

But the light is the ender of all dreams.

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Mark Hampson]

Very short and sweet! Indeed, dreams are the fantasies of the subconscious. Our mind spins to wherever it desires, allowing a bit little control to us in slumber. I like the contrast of light and night you use, but not sure about the word 'ender'. Take heart, this poem compliments your other poem 'The Nightmare', which means this serves it's purpose well.

[Nicole]

very very true, and uu managed it in what four lines?
i like the fantasies of the night, i don't want the light to end them

[unspokenguilt]

i like it...short but sweet