A Broken Promise

I thought he loved me...but I quess I was wrong.

I trusted you, I belived in you
Yet you filled my heart with lies,
I loved you, I held you
And now you have darkend my beautiful skies
The blooming roses that once meant so much,
Are black with disapointment,
And icy to the touch.
The smiles we onced shared,
and the way we once cared,
they have both witherd away into a pile of ash
waiting to be smashed.
I used to look into your eyes,
I would see hapiness and fay,
but now your lies
have turned them into a faded grey.
You turned around and left,
you stabbed me in the back,
I knew I no longer could love you,
for' Your heart had turned to black.
You disapperd like a candlelight,
blown out gently with the night,
And so your broken promise surely shows
as you tear my heart in two,
your broken promise,
I love You.

Reviews

[Rilaya-Endgayme]

Nicely done! I can imagine what that would feel like, having someone in your life you thought you loved but now you know that you can't because they didn't love you all along . . . that's heartbreaking! Was this an experience you had, or is it fiction? I want to know!

[Madelin]

Wow i love this.this is amazing probably because i can relateto it love this AWESOME peice