The Monster I Have Become

We all have a monster inside us, waiting to get out.

I'm blinded by the rain,
ingulfed in the darkness,
swallowed by the pain.
I'd say me life is Hell,
But that compliment's to well,
In my cold,annoying world,
everything is wrong,
I fell firethat has no warmth,
I hear birds without a song,
I stumble over air,
I scream when no one's there.
My refliction in the water,
is absent everyday,
I feel like she is there,
just trying to runaway.
The monster inside of me,
My evil half and part,
Has betrayed all I love,
It has ceased the beating of my heart.
The evil spirits that have taken over,
will rule me very soon,
they keep on growing stronger,
by the light of the wicked moon.
All the good is now a hum,
As evil roars.
This is the monster I have become.
 

Reviews

[Holly]

Interesting, interesting *strokes chin and thinks of how to rightly put opinion* I feel this piece has much anger in it... Much anger indeed............. Hmm.. Need someone to talk to Tori? *Looks up with big eyes and concern* Are you sure? I'm here if all else fails. And my counciler could help to... (JKJKJKJK) Anyway, forizile I like this poem. I wouldn't comment if I didn't. It reminds me of a song called Animal I've Become. You might like it.. Look it up if you want to or have the time.

[Tanya]

this is nice. there are some errors. read it over and you'll find them. i love it though.