Silver Moon

What's happening to me?

The Silver Moon is shining,
and our fates are intertwining,
Bloody stars are calling out our names,
They tell us that nothing will ever be the same.
Will this change lift us into the great abyss,
or drop us into a world of nothingness.
The Golden Sun is setting,
happines I am forgetting,
My mind is clouding,
my heart is shouting.
The Silver Moon reveals something more,
a new emotion I've never felt before,
The Bloody Stars hide everything I knew,
leaving only what I know...and you.

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

As I read this piece, it made me think of werewolves. I liked how it wasn't but it made you think it was.

[Rima]

Excellent! I love it, great detail and reads very well
Great job!

[Tina Kline]

Great poem. Wonderful descriptions.
I like the feel of changing in it. It makes
me think of werewolves.

Tina

[Faith]

absolutely wonderful...
great use of imagery : )