*Try and Cry*

Randomly wrote this.

I don't know why i try,when instead i cry
my feelings,my words,my wounds are all nothing
always trying,always crying
this fate is too real
im just holding on for something to feel
why try,when i cry?

Author's Note

What do you think???

Reviews

[Bud]

Leaves one to think in deep thought! Can feel the sentiment in this. Never give up trying, no matter how many tears may fall!

"my feelings,my words,my wounds are all nothing"

Very touching line! They are something, as you've proven with this piece. I see a Talent coming out to share with others their talents.

[Nathan Noble]

great potential, keep it up.