love, is what he said.

You`ve stayed too long.

it`s time to go.

you broke my heart.

i should have known.

you said you loved me.

you said you cared.

now here i stand,

in my despair.

you look at me

i look at you

you smile, "you`ve known i`m always true..",

i turn away. tears.pain. heartache.

"How could you!?".

"my love, how could i not..?".

Silence.

no one speaks. no one breaths.

Love doesn`t last forever,

especially when your only fifteen. </3

Author's Note

i wrote this while i was at boarders...it just sorta popped outta y head, like, :huh?", lolz...i knowit`s abit short, but i would love to hear ur comments about it! i care deeply about ur opinion, so everybody please..!! any suggestions?? what did u think of it??? ALL COMMENTS ARE WELCOMED!! <3

Reviews

[Jurikosan]

Ahaha My friend told me to read this.

100/100

[deeps]

I like that last line as well
This is a well expressed write here
Full of emotion

[Last Lying Look]

I'm fifteen too. I'm glad to find other writers to relate to.
The lines
' "How could you!?".
"my love, how could i not..?". ' really struck me.
Amazing poem.
-Elissa

[Almost Alive]

I must agree with him, that last line was... In some way deep, should I say...
We teenagers come and love whatever stands in front of us, yet, we don't realize what's better for us, or who is real when nothing is...

[Nik Dendera]

I loved the last line! Gave it a slight sarcasm that really worked.

Nice flow to it, too, well mixed with the theme and the quick fire lines.

Great piece!