Simply Disappear

A man's pain after the loss of his loved one.

     The pain, the bleakness of life, the unbearably weight of reality itself pressing down upon him, crushing him beneath it's weight as his sole anchor in life, his love, is brutually torn away, taking with her his happiness, his joy, leaving him as a sad, hollow shell of his former self.

 

     His despair and misery eating away at him till all that is left is his miserable existance. Till finally he can stand it no more, with a shot, his misery, his pain, his anguish over the one he lost, simply disappear.

Author's Note

I got bored. And depressed.

Reviews

[Amanda-xx]

I like it, it was interesting

[demureminds]

Very emotion stricken and the sadness was well described. I often write better when I feel down too, it's a great outlet. Nice work.

[Pandacheeksz]

Oh gosh, Reading this brought tears to my eyes!

[alexlessah]

its very sad u could almost feel his pain. great job

[Star2128]

that is so sad. i am terribly in the feeling of sadness reading this. this is deep. makes me think about how i feel about losing someone i loved very much as well.

[Nicole]

it was very good it reminds me alot of my always alone poem

[Imladrisbound]

Wow. I can relate to the feeling. Very deep bro!