I want to be

i want to be his one and only

i want to be his star and glory

i want to be his entire world

and i want to be his only girl

i want to be his other half

i want to be his imerging path

i want to be his thoughts all day

i want him to feel this very same way

i want to be his morning thought

i want to be his dreaming girl

i want to be his everything

i want him to see me for me

i want to be the cute couple

i want to be able to talk to him

i want to be like bestest friends

i want to be all of this with him

i want him to see me in the hall ways

i want him to search for me day by day

i want him to hold me in his arms

and say i love you to when times get hard

i want him to care for me

the way i do for him

i want to be his silver and gold

i want to be the smile on his face

i want to be his everything

i want to be all he sees

i want to be all of this to him

but sadly he dosent know i exist

so ill just keep on dreaming my thoughts,

and hope one day that ill be in all his talk

maybe one day

ill be all of this to him.

Author's Note

high school issues....

Reviews

[Rajwa]

Monopolizing is a ghost, it sucks the Soul.
Beware and hold on.. In few feelings change and you start believing your world is revolving around someone, in another time it's another. It is unending cycle of admiration, a burning desire of manipulation.
That makes life thrilling. And the pain makes it real.
Fight on.

[manifesto]

Life is long, keep moving on, sing yourself a song, and write on. :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I like the repetition, and the expressions. Some of the lines are a little cliche. Remember that using a cliche is ok once in a while but don't pile them up in a single poem.

That aside, nice poem. All it needs is a bit of revision.

[stars are far]

that was so sweet .. and i really hope all your thoughts come true :)
well done :)