Broken Hearted

love~

it filed the air

it filed the room

it filled my heart

like a full balloon

it gave me a melody 

to play with and not break apart

like a brand new toy

all shiny and truely filled with joy,

 from the heart

but you came along,

you had a toy,

not friendly or fun,

but not yet a gun

it was a needle,

a melody you made with your feet

it clashed with my song

and made it no fun to sing along,

you popped my balloon,

you were like a crazy bafoon

you broke my newly mended heart,

you tore it apart,

i hated you then,

i hate you now,

if you were jelious why not tell me?, 

instead of burning me to the ground,

dont you see?!

you hurt me!

you tore me apart,

now i have a scare,

left on my heart.

  

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very powerfully written, You penned the emotions well.

[victoria]

thanxs theresa !

[victoria]

thank you, and 'Sugar' dont feel bad.

[sugar]

i feel all sad now

[Leave me alone....]

wow this is really good Victoria!

[victoria]

i never write poems, i know im no good