that face in the mirror

i look in the mirror, 

but what do i see?

a beautiful girl stareing back at me.

this girl is a stranger,

we have never met.

inside i feel diffrent,

like i do not match the reflection.

i do not feel gorgeous,

i do not feel pretty,

i feel my personality.

sometimes i may be mean,

and i am sorry.

but dear face in the mirror

what i your story?

i have been broken and torn to sheds

u seem to have no tares in your heart,

nor your head,

i feel damaged, and brutally broken,

you seem untouched, sweet, and stolen

you dont fit in,

not with my thoughts,

but thank you for the kind reflection! 

Author's Note

many mistakes, and not good at all, this poem didnt come out the way i planed =(

Reviews

[Leave me alone....]

Steph's right, you are really beautiful and i'm glad that you see that. But now, you have to see how beautiful you are on the inside!

[sugar]

yay you finally see how beautiful you look on the outside.....now we just gotta work on letting you know how beautiful you are on the inside....

[Becky C Strukamp]

i look in the mirror,
but what do i see?

I think this is something we all do, looking at our reflection, wondering who that is in the mirror,

Good write about reflecting on oneself.

[Sarah W. French]

I think you did a great job on this poem. One line I don't understand id "What I your story?" But I liked it as a whole.