WRITEN FEELINGS

feeling dont show easily,

instead they burrow and hide.

i dont enjoy the symphony

because it depresses me and makes me cry.

I dont like heart break,

though i write about it offin

i dont enjoy pain.

but i cant keep it locked up in a coffin

i cant speak my emotions easily,

instead they float around inside me

i can speak my thoughts clearly,

so i let those just flee free ! 

writing is my passion,

and lets me get it all out.

heart break i shed no tear.

because my emotions are takein out on here.

so thank you alll writers,

who make me feel comforted

who make me feel not alone

in a world thats oh so cold.

thank you everyone,

because without writeing.

i dont know what i'd be.

or even where <3 

Author's Note

many mistakes, i wrote it quick,
i dont like talking about deep emotions,
its just easyer understanding it though writing for me,
so thank you everyone who coments and enjoys my writing <3 thank you!

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

What I liked about this piece of poetry, was it's honest nature. It gives us a picture of the emotional life of an individual at their base core. I think writing is a wonderful way to express those emotions that are hard to deal with as they swirl around in one's heart and head. Sometimes it's the act of writing them that leads to the answers and understanding we look for. Mistakes aside, It was a good piece of ink! :)

Aaron

[sugar]

hahahah i liked it very good your rhyming was really good it flowed well