Have you reached it?

Have you reached it?

that point of no return.

where the wind blows,

and the peoples hearts grow cold.

Have you seen it?

where people are pail,

and hate everyone

and live without a trail.

Have you been their?

to this terrifying place,

where no one believes in 

fairy-tails or rainbows.

Have you reached it?

that point of no return.

where the wind blows 

and the peoples hearts grow cold.

Reviews

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Beautiful as a rose!

[sugar]

hahah niceee

[MetBySunlight]

I like how you used the feature of repetition to help get the message across to the reader. A very powerful piece you have written!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An excellent write...terrific flow with the questions that play on the readers emotions...

fantastic :)