When You do Things like This..

Its like you jumped off a cliff

when you do things like this,

its like you have disapeared

when you wallow in your fear.

You scare me when you run a hide,

and no one ,

not even i know why.

It scares me when you get hurt

becuase i know someday you will go to far

and ill wake up alone in the dark.

Its like you have disapeared 

when you wallow in your fear.

its like you jumped off a cliff

when you do things like this.

Author's Note

please excuse the spelling and grammor errors...ENJOY!<3

Reviews

[sugar]

does theresa know these are about me? hmm i wonder. ok so all of the poems you write are just so great like it makes me happier to read these to know that there is at least one person that cares. good job also love the pic girl wit red hair...YEAAAAAH BUDDYYYY!

love you lots

[manifesto]

I can relate to this feeling of fear for another person, and I know how much it hurts when someone you love is hurting. Beautiful, raw emotion. Keep writing!

[MetBySunlight]

Hmm something a bit different. This is similar to how I feel about a very good friend of mine. I like this one!

[JRB]

interesting... view of love lost or found not sure

[Summer'sBreeze]

a good write
well done

[stars are far]

This was so nicely writen ..
well done :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great powerful write...

[Thea]

Well said...This piece was interesting...A fine piece of writing...Keep it up!
:)))

[~ Stefanie ~]

This was very well-written! Great job with this one :)

[victoria]

thank you!!