Identifying love

there he was, so close to me, right behind me. He took a step and then a warm hand touched me shivering arm and pulled me into a warm imbrace. 

it had always been awkward between us. We both felt it, that weird connection. We always had to resist though, knowing my sister and your brother were dating. 

but here...he took the chance. It felt...so ...right, being there in his arms. so confortable. Was it we were always ment to be, or was it we were like brother and sister. There was a form of love there. Now ...we need to identify what kind

Author's Note

confusing ..yes
its just something i had to get out of my system.
i never write storys, i always write poems soooo
i appologize if its bad,
please comment your thoughtss

Reviews

[manifesto]

I understand that feeling of being unable to distinguish your feelings, so keep trying! And don't stop writing in the meantime. ;)

[JRB]

short sweet thoughtful, keep up the writes, spelling

[Summer'sBreeze]

not bad
it has a emotional depth to it
really good

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very sweet write...has a nice emotional depth to it
Excellent :)

[~ Stefanie ~]

There were a few spelling errors. 'imbrace' should be 'embrace'
'ment' should be 'meant'
'confortable' should be 'comfortable'
Other than that this was a really good short story. I think you wrote it well and I think you showed the emotion perfectly. Well done!

[Leave me alone....]

omg this is really good!!! I want you to make this into a book NOW!!! I COMAND IT!!