My healing heart

i thought that i was done for,

that my heart was cracked forever

i thought i had gone over the edge

right into a black hole, never to see light again.

i thought that i would never heal,

and never be the happy soul.

But...

you came along,

with a heart so kind.

you had enough to fill in mine.

So you took my heart,

taking the pain with it.

but instead of you feeling the saddened pain,

you fell in love,

and helped to heal my heart once again.

You were always that kind of a caring friend.

and now your all mine,

my boo for life

and even if this ends,

my heart will be hole,

and you heart will be broken.

Author's Note

quick, short, simple, and sweet.
and just to say...
that im flying,
and am totally off my feet =)

10-20-11<333333333 *iloveyou*

Reviews

[Dove]

This is a emotional read and a fantastic write. I was glued to this poem, I seriously couldnt take my eyes off of it. Amazing job!

[stars are far]

This is amazing :D
well done :D

[Shy Girl]

Why do I get the feeling this isn't a person of whom you write about? That last stanza directs me that way. The selflessness of this heart healer for you, only to have you break theirs...makes a point. (It just reads that way for me) That and your author's note of flying. Such a deep emotion woven poem all the same, whether it's a living being or not who helps you time and again with a healing process. It definately has my head scratching, of how you seem to take one route, but then seem to switch wording. Well done :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

wonderfully penned, and emotional write. nicely done!

[~ Stefanie ~]

There were a few typos, but they were already addressed. Anyway, other than those minor things I really liked this poem. There was genuine emotion behind every line and I love reading poems where I can easily sense that in the writer's work. Loved it and well done!

[White Ink]

"and now your all mine," should be "you're"
"my heart will be hole," did u mean "whole"?
"and you heart will be broken." hmm.. you or "your"?

Apart from the above, an honest emotional write :)

[Rafat]

ahh...so nice...love it!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Awesome love poem...
I could feel the love...
amazing :)

[R J Askew]

Long may your love flight continue! The poem is a really positive and cheering write to read. It is great the the darkness of the first verse is washed away by love. You show what a great force love is. It is so basic and common, yet soooo absolutely astonishing as well. But that last verse! There is a note of negative there, though many wld say realism I suppose. Anyway, even being super realistic I wld say enjoy the flight!

[13ReasonsWhy]

awwwwh i loved it!