Cheating, Beating ,Broken heart!

hello there,

nice to meet you,

oh please dont stop because i walked in on you.

oh no, please keep cheating on me.

WHAT? your gonna stop because your caught.

oh no darlin , you dont have to.

Its just that i WALKED IN ON YOU!

but thats all well and fine.

i never broke you heart. 

But you just broke mine.

Reviews

[Rajwa]

THIS ONE IS GORGEOUS !!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

sad that people like that exist on this earth. nicely done.

[stars are far]

Soo nice .. And sweetly done..
I love this style of writing ..

[Chris Yip]

Short and straight to the point. Well done, you have turned a moment of anger into a well worded poem.

[_]

ooooh! i love the sarcasm its really cool that you used it like that. mhmmmm you told him man! i should have been there to flip my hair dramatically :P

[manifesto]

I love the rhythm and the beat, and the sarcastic undertone makes it a little more lighthearted. Powerful piece!

[MetBySunlight]

Short but powerful (:

[Shy Girl]

Very nice poem. Well penned emotions...very strong within the small piece. It speaks volumes from just the emotions upon walking in that room. Very nice poem :)

[paradise]

Very strong way of emotion
one of the hardest things in life is having to go
though a break up when you are cheated on
It makes it hard but you become stronger life goes on and gets better someday you'll meet the one :)

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

:( tear and love it it will never be healed