MY MESSY DREAMY THOUGHTS

i have so many words

that id like to say

but they never come out

at least not the right way

i have so many feelings

trying to escape

but my body holds them captive

like a posonise snake

i feel traped inside my mind

and lost inside myself

my heart has gone blind

and my mind has gone deff

i dont know where to go

im starting to get scared

more feelings pile up

is this all because my heart was tared

i understand im in pain

yes heartbrake is its name

but its slowing trapping me inside it

and im feeling like im lost in a game

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this is the dream that haunts me

it keeps my mind a biss

it makes my body numb

even when we kiss

i understand your here

but why all these thoughts of lost

dose anyone undestand? 

or am i simply lost

please oh please come save me

your precense calms me down

you are my only savior

i dont enjoy to frown

know i finally got you back

i cant seem to lose again

so manay thoughts i think

and all inside one head

im thinking of it now

as voices scream these words

i have to get them out

or the mind will start to burn

i am not going insane

its just these things i think

after all your dreams

is your feelings becoming complete

Author's Note

okay this is very confusing and i am sorry , i know i jump all around but i was going for i have this nightmare of loseing the one i love that i just got back and then i cant seem to controll the dreams or the thoughts except when hes around me. I had to get it out and i typed it quick because i had to get the words out. I am sorry for the confusion and jumping around alot, but i hope you still find some kind of joy while reading this. Its just a poem its not really what i feel but its what i have felt in the past. i hope you can relate. ENJOY<3

Reviews

[manifesto]

I don't think this is confusing at all, and as for the jumping around, it seems to add to the emotion in the poem rather than take away from it. Lovely rhythm, by the way.

[John F Carver]

Again the questions I had to consider is it self-therapy or is it really art.

i love it! brings back weird deja vu for me personally. :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I liked it. True to life. A flow of thoughts, very entertaining for the reader. Great write.

[Rajwa]

It Feels The Best To Express Your Feelings In Words, It's Confusing But Not Bad.