The Nation’s wonder to Christian’s prosperity

this poem begings with a well know quote , by anonymoys and it builds from it addressing god and thanking him fro all the good he does for us while still apologising for our bad attitudes

                         "Gratitude is the greatest attitude".

                          Oh! Lord I give you my gratitude,

                         Forgive me if I give you an attitude,

                   I hate how this life treats me as a substitute.

                 Standing on stage for me will always be debut.

            I wouldn’t talk about latitudes, neither about longitudes,

  Because I am not sure if my roots design my map but my attributes

 

Lord your name shall never be called into dispute.

Christians propagation, domination and rotation about all axes of earth is resolute,

It shall never be called into dispute.

 Lord I salute you; with my faith and my soul I shall play my role, I shall praise you.

Raise you above all, I shall praise you.

Erase others all interfering. In all swearing I shall rephrase and regret.

Through prayer I shall survive, it’s what keeps us alive after all,

If not to pave our way to heaven away from tavern

 

Even if the power of demons persist, it helps us to resist and dive away,

To you who never delay, never dismay but emphasize peace be passed on just like relay.

To you who break down all the layers of sins we’ve committed,

Inherited from our fore fathers and transmitted amongst others.

To you who answers to the nation’s wonders to Christian’s prosperity, integrity and community

 

Without preaching but reaching for the sky,

On top of mount Zion, where exist a lion.

Who with his presence, he takes precedence,

With his dominance he diminish demons

Into Devine lemons hanging on a tree I shall rely on to never let me fall,

Yes lord you shall never let me fall. With my Christianity I shall walk tall,

That is how I roll

With your tender heart you render peace,

That’s how you roll

My beloved Christianity I shall never surrender.

 

 

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bluefire]

"Without preaching but reaching for the sky,
On top of mount Zion, where exist a lion.
Who with his presence, he takes precedence,
With his dominance he diminish demons"
~*~
This is so amazing, I read it allowed like a preacher and it came out easily and splendidly, like a song.
You get lost in the words and think of God and his greatness, the last line made me think of Skillet's "Never Surrender"
So beautiful..
Well done! ^^

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

THank you very much Bluefire, this means alot :)

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[Oyindamola Shoola]

this is very good...I love the way you presented your love for God and Christianity...

[melissa]

Great poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx melissa, really appretiated

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Arabella Song]

Hmmm, the meter is a tad bit off, making your rhyme scheme seem just a tad bit flaky, but it does fit in with the rhythm of the quote, so it works :)

On a more personal level, it succeeded in making me a bit uncomfortable and teary eyed, mostly because I was raised in a Christian home and lost my faith over the years, so anytime I'm confronted with something this strong in faith, I have trouble reading it. So, I guess that means you did good :D

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx for such a constructive review, really appreciate

[Arabella Song]

No problem :D

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

uhm its fine i get it, but to fix the meter how do i do pleae help

[Arabella Song]

Lots of practice!! Meter is really hard.

[Honey-Bee]

Wonderful poem! Love a poem that give praise to God! My beloved Christianity I shall never surrender...Strong line of love for God! Thanks for sharing!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx for picking that up honey, you are very intelligent and thanx for the review

[lissalovesyou]

Beautifully done and shows full devotion to Christianity. Loved it!
lissalovesyou:)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much, i christian i am and i ask god to help me serve him all the time, tanx

[lissalovesyou]

Your welcome. Write on!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

same goes to u please keep those read requests poping...

[lissalovesyou]

I will
lissalovesyou:)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

Im not relgious in anyway but this was a very well written poem for someone who is :) I can respect good religion

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much, please keep those reading requests poping.

[everton ellis]

:) its a wonderful poem.i like the refrence and the whole perception

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much man, i had to refer because those words are not authentically mine. thanx for the review

[everton ellis]

cool no prob

[Rishabh Arora]

Though I am not a Christian... Ive always believed in the words of the Bible. Reading through your poem, I was brought to my schooling days, where love for God was the only good thing we learned. :) Thank you for bringing back this memory to me.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx man, it means a lot, god is the onlly one who can give us a crusifiction kind of love. thanx.
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