Songs That heal...

this poem, singles out from a poem i've written and got Aethereal coming up with this one and gave it to me to keep it, enjoy!

We Want to Heal...

We want to bring
you the real.
We want to sing
songs that heal.

May we ply with speakers booming,
where we sing like flowers blooming,
chasing sorrows that are looming,
and quelling furies that are fuming?

Just drop that jazz,
and bring the blues,
the one that has
the tune that woos;

No razzmatazz,
no complex views.
Bring forth pizzazz
with tender clues.

Reviews

[Gregory Stires]

i really like this poem. and i also love the inspiration in your poem. i believe music can heal the soul as well as other things such as sleep and relaxation which i use guided meditation music for to relax after a stressed school day.

[maria ( rose)]

I absolutely adore this poem and your words of inspiration. I read this one first because I love music and I do believe that songs can heal the soul. Great Job!!!!
maria rose♥

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx.......:)

[maria ( rose)]

your welcome! ........ :)

[CMM2]

What a very moving and inspiring piece. This definitely makes me want to turn on some music and let it take me places that I have never been. Incredible, thank you for sharing this it has definitely motivated me to go read some more of your work!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you verymuch, like wise..i am reading urs after that marvelous piece.

[Fenix Flight]

I absolutly LOVE the flow. Its catchy just like a song. :-D Perfect!!! very well written the word choice is also amazing! 100/100

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you Fenix Flight your review really means a lot

[Cory Barrett]

Allow us to mourn, before trying to cheer us up.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx for the review....:)

[Kamari's]

I loved it very amusing with the words you used it was a very fun read

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much enjoy writting...

[Frontier]

Hehe, I like that word razzmatazz, this does sound like a call for healing!

And the answer you provide, jazz/blues, seems just right!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanks Frontier...indeed the blues..can heal.

[Emily]

I love how you started it! The wording got my attention! Well done.

[sharonlee]

Ahh... very lyical... great beat to this.

[FireFox9]

Cool and interesting but the last four lines are a little odd because of the use of Ramayana and pizzazz. Still good though.