Euphoria

A random poem

Breathless secrets,

Musical screams,

Sensual kisses,

Strawberries and whipped cream.

 

Overwhelming needs,

Racing hearts,

So very close,

Too far apart.

 

Oceans of honey,

Heated touch,

Teasing tongue,

Never enough.

 

Trembling fingers,

Motionless time,

Calming embrace,

Moonlit wine.

 

Warm whispers,

Wishing star,

True love,

Never too far.

 

Think what you will dear,

Of the dreams spelt out above,

I bestow these edible, audible emotions on thee,

In the sweetest form of love.

 

Author's Note

I'm open to any critique. As long as it isn't something like "well i don't like it because... I just don't like it.." that is of no help to me lol.

Reviews

[alan khan]

pretty sensual. i love writing these kind of poems and i thought this was really good. i liked it. nice work.

[amberbettymarie]

beautiful, passionate yet calm. I love it

[Coyote Poetry]

The flow and story in the poem is wonderful. Your words were a pleasure to read. I likes it all. A outstanding poem.
Coyote