Only You Could

Yet Another Romantic Poem. Wth is wrong with me.

Fresh melon kisses,

And everything good,

Whispering wonderful words,

In a way that only you would.

 

A body I could wrap myself in,

Wearing an angelic glow,

Waking the growling beast within,

You are mine! And everyone should know.

 

Eyes I could drown in,

Holding such smoky passion,

Leaving me vulnerable as you stare,

In an awfully lustful fashion.

 

And ears I wish to nibble upon,

Devouring the taste of what I need,

Moving lower, but higher in mind,

Slowly melting in your arms ‘till I scream.

 

Mmm, your fresh melon kisses,

Baby, you’re everything good,

And honey I love you for loving me,

In that way that only you could.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think lol.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Adora, this was so pure and sweet. What guy wouldn't love to hear words like these whispered in his ear. What a beautiful thing to read on this day.

You are a wonderful romantic!
Antonio

[Iota]

Fresh Melon Kisses, Yes this is totally mushy and I love it. It has love written in every verse and it seems someone has pushed you off your feet. Life is always worth living when we feel as this poem reads. This is very good, it has rhythm, and nice loving flare. P.S. I am glad I am not the only who feels this way. Great job.

[ZaZa]

This is was so beautiful and so filled with emotion. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.

[Sharkapillar]

So sweet, so full of raw emotion! The flow is amazing, and the vividness! Is was as if I could feel the happenings in the poem physically!
Amazing write, ♥