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I am clumsy

“I drop things accidently

All of the time,”

And I have to make things rhyme.

I am so stupid

“I make mistakes that are dumb,”

Too often for my own good,

And I want to walk aimlessly through some woods.

I am a liar,

“I tell only half the truth,”

Because it has become a habit to make things look prettier than they are,

And I hate to wonder if I will get anywhere and how far.

I am a fat-a*s,

“I don’t go to the gym enough,”

Because I’m too self-conscious but you say I’m lazy,

And I can never wait patiently.

I am a b***h,

“I am just like my father,”

Because his sperm carried those damned genes to me,

And I wish I could be perfect the you want me to be.

I am lost,

I don’t know who or what I am,

Because I’m a fat, lying, stupid, clumsy, b***h,

And I wish I didn’t think that of myself but that is how you say it is.

Author's Note

Um, Kind of personal. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Iota]

Time is eternal and it will bring wisdom along for the ride. yes in time you will feel differently about yourself. in time others will no longer define how you feel about yourself. However today, I can relate to how your feeling, very power and personal write, I hope time passes quickly for you so you can see the light.

[Bexfinch]

If this is how you feel about yourself you shouldn't cuz if that's ur real pic on your profile ur really pretty on my case I feel im ugly and described a bit in ur poem but i allways assure myself ur beautiful or no boy would look twice at you it was a really good poem and sorry it was sooo late .

[ChristianM]

Wow, this is how I feel about myself too, except I guess I would be a b*****d. lol
All writers are tortured in some way or another and those who deny this are seriously kidding themselves. You did a great job expressing what most of us feel from time to time. In that respect this is a great poem.
The words you put on paper, the words that inspire, lift up, and motivate others make you a very beautiful person and you should never be anyone other than the person that bleeds out through your writing, and others will see that beauty.
Don't let others tell you what you are. Fight the tide Adora.
=)

[Zombeh]

I agree with Khaotic, you shouldn't put such a downer on yourself. I mean, jeez, I'm not that awesome, but i try to look at all the positive stuff ;D Anyhoo, I didn't really get the...rhythm of this poem, it seemed choppy, but it was personal to you as you said, and that's what makes it good also. The emotion in this can flow through to the reader, as it did to me. Nice :)

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

if you think of yourself this way stop. it's not healthy. i can't catch the flow of this but the words are powerful and emotional so your message is quite clear. thank you for sharing :)