Then You Came

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The wait was agonizing.

It was long,

Lonely,

Anticipating,

Stirring,

Pinching,

Agitating,

Disturbing,

Alluring,

It was painstaking,

Then you came,

And it was breath-taking.

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Danse Macabre]

Better bring a towel next time. ;D

[Frantzuu]

this is beautiful, great piece of writing :D

[Michael X]

I love this poem adora, it's one of the coolest styles ive read in a long time, i think most readers would agree that the one word sentences have a vivid, fast pace, passionate effect and the ending encapsulates the romantic escapade
awsome job :)

[zappy]

this was cool i like how u put it all together

[MissWordSmith]

in one word : FANTASTIC

[i am skeleton jelly]

really captures what it's like to give a handjob to someone who just railed four lines of coke

[ChristianM]

Great poem.
Really describes the wait for happiness.
Bravo Adora