I Wish

I can feel your lips...

I see your smile...

I hear your laughter...

I float in your arms while...

I shudder at your careless caress...

I giggle at your wonderful words...

I smell your scent...

I gasp as you begin to blur...

I can taste your fading kiss...

I am drowning in your bliss...

I feel your fingers brush away my tears...

And that is when I wish...

That you were mine and you were here.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I think you have a case of youth and I will trade you for almost anything to posess it again lol

[Vartul]

So soft and sweet, with a slow sadness that overtakes at the end,I wish(sorry,couldn't avoid this) that it were longer.Beautiful piece!

[Dutch Jr.]

I definitely get the nostalgic tone reading this piece. And you appeal to so many different senses with these words. Like this one, going to the library.

[MissWordSmith]

Your work always hits a soft spot. This was so touching. The total happiness to the complete longing!
Fantastic write, in my opinion.

[Dannie]

Some of the things you write hit deep, sometimes, J, but just because I've felt what you're talking about and can relate.
Like everything else of yours I've read, this is very good.

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

so wonderful. makes me want to cry really. great use of emotion keep up the good work

[ChristianM]

I have to admit this one depresses me. lol
But you evoke that certain memory every one of us has. The one that got away.
Very heart wrenching yet beautiful.

[Michael X]

Captivating and romantic, and passionate Adora, your words flow as you are,
a natural poet, the unique style and voice permiates every thing you write, and this is a fine example of your talent, keep up the excellent work :)