Love in Fragments

Bleh

I don’t know what this is,

And I don’t know

why...

But the voluptuous clouds seem to...

seduce

me,

And I can feel the

...blue...

of the sky.

The Sun feels as if

It has wandered

 Tooclose.

And my thoughts are

Delusional

F  R  A  G  M  E  N  T  S  .  .  .

An early spring seems to have

invaded

My senses.

And gone is my

Obduracy’s

...Remnant.

I don’t know why

This has happened...

And I know not if it is

True...

But it seems

That predictably,

But beautifully,

I’ve fallen

                head-

                        over-

                                heels

 for you.

Author's Note

Let Me Know What you Think

Reviews

[Anicca]

This is brilliant. I love everything about it. Every word sounds as though it was made for this poem. I like this :)

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...this is amazing. Beautiful and amazing.


You have hit perfection I believe. Eloquently described the way a heart flutters, skips and trips...how delightful, it's like you tasted how time stalls....actually tasted it :) :) :)

Fantastic!

[Everett DeValle]

I'll tell you what I think, it is Breathtakingly Beautiful...Gracefully Gorgeous...Terrifically Titillating...Poem. Love the format, and everything in between. Excellently done. :)

[Just Jayren]

Your structure and use of volcab is very clever, and it seems very sophisticated. I like this for sure!

[NyanMeow]

I really like how you formatted the font with the different colors and sizes to get your point across. Great job. :)

[paul]

beautiful and powerful

[GunMetal]

I loved the structure. Very creative. You've made this piece just as visual as it is readable, and the poem itself was wonderful. Well done.

[ChristianM]

Beautiful portrayal of falling in love. Nicely done. And yes I'm back. It's been a while no doubt. lol
I've felt this way only once, and I squandered it. Hopefully my bad choices can be fixed in the months to come.

[Crowley]

A dripping testament to desire and wanting. I loved the structure and the writing equally. Nice work, haven't been by in a while, seems like you are still ticking....