Functionality

Bleh?

It’s a slippery   S

                                L

                                                  O

  P

                  E

From here on,

Time will   f l y   by,

And your reflection                                                                         noitcelfer

Will start to                                      s i g h

In despair over the

D i s r e p a i r

Of what was once

Functional.

You’re on the      h i g h w a y         to

Hell.

And you’ll stay on it from here on,

Your ability to

P a u s e

Time,

Will pause itself.

And the blue skies will

Be  e.n.d.l.e.s.s.  greys,

Hanging from thin

Threads of                              d e s p a i r          ,

Mourning the d i s r e p a i r

Of what will never be

F u n c t I o n a l          .

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think. Ignore the P in slope, it's being stubborn and won't stay in place. And I can't get it to go back to where it belongs. v.v'

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

My eyes are squinting..Yikes after they were adjusted to read this turns out
its a very good write :)

[Matthew Kult]

I like the over all meaning. but some of the structure does take a bit away from the poem itself. I also have a migraine so this maybe just me. Again, i like the meaning I got from it.

Regards,

Matthew