The Admirer

Another Free Verse

Green eyes,

A flurry of violet skirts,

Dainty feet,

Not a sound.

Silence.

Green eyes,

Red lips,

Long fingers,

So soft.

Green eyes,

One long pirouette,

Aplomb,

Tendrils of fiery tresses.

Porcelain skin,

Sheen of sweat,

Sparkling green,

Deep breath.

Adagio,

Bow.

She is breath-taking,

Indeed.

 

 

 

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Reviews

Wow.... when people name the "adagio" they made it with me... wonderful Italian influenced word. This write is speaking of someone you totally love. You made us feel within your write, and love her too!

[reflectingus]

I really love how you kept it succinct, and it's beautifully written. :)

[The old me]

great details and interesting subject matter

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice descriptions and feel.

[Lavon Forkeeps]

Really liked this (: Pained a vivid picture with so few words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description gave life to the photo. The movement and energy of life always make us dream and find peace. Thank you for the outstanding poem.

[Moflo]

Interesting piece. I liked the pacing and your descriptions were very accurate. Good job!