grave thoughts.

A Poem by Magic plus the mayhem.

This is a pome about how some peopel that are dead may be forgotton,but someone will allways be thinking about them. :) <3 (: R.I.P

Plants on the grave,over grow.

Butterflys hidden in these weeds.

Black wings make these forgotton thoughts fly.

R.I.P

This is 4 the forgotton...

© 2011 Magic plus the mayhem.

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WynterPhoenix

The only thing I can criticize on is a few spelling errors, but this is an amazing poem. Short but it gets the point across and there is so much meaning in the few words you've chose. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose F.

Short, but very deep. I like it. =)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Babieegirl

nice write. Careful on your spelling though! (=

Posted 14 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 3, 2011
Last Updated on June 3, 2011

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Magic plus the mayhem.

Austin, TX

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