Cut Too Deep

I don't even know why I wrote this honestly..I was happy with my life at this time.

If one tear falls
Then there's more to follow
The more that come
The harder to swallow

Breathing so loud
Its a pain in your chest
Not too much longer
I'll be put to rest

Do I have any last goodbyes?
Any last things to say?
I guess it doesn't matter
I'll be gone today

I've hid my sorrows
And buried my pain
What's left of this world?
What's more to gain?

Reach into the drawer
I pull out a knife
I know what I did
I must end my own life

One swift move
Right in the heart
Since you had said
Till death do us part

Looking at my scars
Cut too deep
It just hurts
I'll get my final sleep

Minutes to go
But is it my time?
Should this be
My one final rhyme?

I must do it
Can't change my mind
Look for a reason
But there's nothing to find

One last breath
And it goes in
Blood going everywhere
Showing my sin

I think to myself
I don't wanna die
Just minutes left
As I slowly cry

My last thought
A picture of his face
But its over now
I ended it with grace

Author's Note

Reviews please?(:

Reviews

[RedInk524]

Interesting. Lol, dont worry about writing dark when you are happy. Its just your mind's way of creating. You dont have to be sad to be dark.

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Such a sad write full of pain.

[XxtaintedxX]

Thank you so much!(:

[Aurora Lynn]

This was a good poem! The topic was very sad, though. It was terrible that she had to take her own life! I loved the way that it rhymed, which is not an easy thing to do and not have it sound ridiculous. Which this poem didn't. Great job! Thank you for writing this and entering it into my contest!
~Aurora Lynn, from 'In Too Deep'