With no Verdict

basically about the harsh judgments of the world

With no change of heart
I look up to the sky
Life isn't fair
often leaves untied

Guilty, until proven
You're wrapped up in chains
hung from the wall
taking the blame

Charged for a death
that was your own
Why'd you do it?
please answer me so

the raven cry out
their song for the dead
Everyone's judgmental
maybe that's why you left

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. So many lines stood out.
"Guilty, until proven
You're wrapped up in chains"
Too many want to be a judge. Need less judges and more friends. I understand the ending. Better to escape then wait for the final decision. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[~Lizzy♬]

It has that very strong and emotional state. I love this poem because it shows how you feel. I love peoms that are about how you feel. Just... wonderful... Wording is great and they flow into each stanza perfectly.

[Stripes]

This is a very strong poem, the wording is great, the way the stanzas and the words flow is gorgeous. Great work.