Fall in love

can we try, I know it can happen... let's fall in love again

Let the shooting stars pass
as they did the first night
I want to try again
I want to do this right
you walked into my life
thinking you were invited
why did you overstay
but leave me brokenhearted
I know we fell in love
I know you never believed
I beg of you to try
and give me a chance to please
I know it can happen
let the shooting stars pass
give us a chance
I only ask that
Come Love,
let's fall in love again

Author's Note

Hope u guys liked this... this is for one of my really good friends. Who suffered a major heartbreak. So Please Review.

Reviews

[serpent]

an awesome write... inspiring in all the right ways...however...sometimes its letting go of things means you are stronger..its just a personal opinion...
that being said...I cant that the pen dipped in sadness and heartache tends to produce touching writes..this is one of them...

[Jazique]

Awe that was nice never give up on love esp those who show.

[LenLenxRawr]

i just fell in love with this poem
i really love the last line
"lets fall in love again"

powerful line M'dear ^^
hoping to read more of your writing

Such celestial imagery of a lost romance! Really is one of your best pieces! It hold depth!

[Actress999]

I like this poem a lot. It all flows together, like it was meant to be. The shooting stars lines are extremely effective.

I really like this. I find myself feeling like alot of the time. Its easy to relate to.

[Aven]

the line about the shooting stars really takes it up a notch, and I love the way you formulated the last line "let's fall in love again", that is such a powerful line! lovely. :)

[al25]

Wow! I mean seriously this is amazing. So effective. Defintely my favourite poem by you and one of the best peoms written on this website. You did a really great job here, I really enjoyed reading this.