Let Me Lose Myself in Wonderland

to escape reality is impossible...but doesn't mean you can't create your own

 Just let me continue to fall like this

 all the way into this bottomless pit

 Like Alice, I wish to escape

 following a white rabbit

 down to that cavity
in the ground

 where the world becomes my wonderland

 where I disappear...

 becoming who I wish to be

 this my very own reality

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.. Review Please

Reviews

[Jazique]

That was awesome my friend would have enjoyed that. Keep it up.

[DalainaRenee]

I love Alice In Wonderland. And this poem makes me remeber all over why i like it! I love the painting too!

[al25]

Its amazin. its funny that you wrote this poem snce its the way i feel a lot of the times just couldnt put it int words like you do. Really great could be my favourite poem ever. thanks for the read.

[manifesto]

rocks! (sorry, that's my new word :D) so, keep rocking!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

spectacular concurrence between the concrete and the sublime~ much enjoyed!~

aww verry good blossom! u shud enter this into the wonderland contest! :) miss u...