Erase My Mistake

do you wish you can take back everything ever said.

An eraser may erase

Any mistake

But it can't erase a mistake

Made on purpose

 

Your hurt her so bad

You broke her heart

You made her believe

You loved her

 

She gave you so much

Especially happiness

How you wish you could

Erase that mistake

 

She gave you love

Much more understanding

A reason to tell

Why your worth so much, living

 

You want to erase this

You want her back

You want to take back everything you said

 

Everybody loved her

She changed their hearts

How can she do that?

When she's no longer part

 

She spread her wings

And flew away

How you wish

You can erase this mistake

Author's Note

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Reviews

[manifesto]

We are often left wishing we could just go back and undo that one little thing. But, we can't. The best we can do is to learn to forgive ourselves (and others) and move on, because there is always hope, and hope helps us overcome.

Can we erase our past? If an eraser were to erase our mistakes made on purpose... I find most of my life would wither away. :> An interesting concept.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s very nice point of view about love topic...and the time, which could not turn back...Familiar and sweet :)

[Aven]

sometimes we need a wake up call to realize our mistakes... although, sometimes it may already be too late to repair... nicely written!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lyrical poetic feels like a song waiting to be sung~ well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

The great dream. To be able erase wrong words said and action that left someone sad and heart broke.. I like this poem. Your wish is the wish of most of us. The ending is true. After the action is done. It is too late. A outstanding poem.
Coyote