Just a crush.

Nobody knows is it one-sided.

[…]

i watch him

his confident steps

charming thin smile

clinging on to a cigarette

as if without it, he's gonna die

[…]

i woder if he watches me

cross my branch-like arms

lick my lips as if it's sahara outside

glance at him every once in a while

for he's a wild flower that can't be mine

[…]

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is an intriguing message that got my attention the whole way thru! I love the way you use unusual observations instead of the typical boring love poem stuff. Your details are shared in a way that makes us really adore the narrator's honesty & we're relating to what he/she is going thru with this little crush. Who hasn't experienced this? You spell it out with lots of originality (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[Yahallo]

Aw, thank you so much! Your comments always make my day. :)

Crushes can crush you hard, haha.

[sette]

oh i love the poem so simple yet so real.

[Yahallo]

Thanks a lot, sette!

[sette]

you are welcome