Even This

 

Through dark walls

A bite

A beat

A break

Discovered heads

Stone washed hearts

Shining three days

Odd unnecessary images

 

 [Illustrated by BSK]

Reviews

[Michael X]

Yann, you must be studying rules, not bad, the conjunction, transition, line break and simplicity work well with originality, now all you need is detail , although, i don't necessarily understand the meaning, as it loses me almost instantly, as in, I'm not sure what you are going for here, you have improved drastically
sinse i've last read your work. I look forward to reading more, thanks for sharing your talent.