Move me

I have all these emotions bottled up inside..here's a little peak.

Do you hear me when I call out to you?

Does it send shivers down your spine?

I wonder what you think when you hear my name,

When you brush your hand against mine,

Or when we’re together.

 

I feel a million different things at once,

Do you feel them too?

Eclectic.

Static.

Motion through my veins, as I shift into overdrive.  

 

I feel like fire, but I say I’m ice cold

I want to know what it’s like

To be in your arms,

To feel your love surround me,

Move me.

 

Sway to the rhythm of our beating hearts,

Slowly.

I’m yours for the night.

For life.

Forever.

Author's Note

This is the first poem I have made in a very, very long time. I'm not an English major.

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

this is a nice love poem.. stanza two really rang clear with me and this line is great imagery:

I feel like fire, but I say I’m ice cold

you don't have to be an English major to write poetry.. just keep one thought in your head: show, not tell.. and you will do fine =)

[Angelfish]

Thank you for that last comment :) I hope I do fine, it helps when you have some inspiration too.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Indeed, and there are a lot of people here to help inspire you =)

[Angelfish]

Thanks! With support on here and my muse, I'll be all set to express my self through my poems.

[Ravyne Hawke]

I will add you to my friends list and whenever you write something new, send me a read request. I look forward to more of your work.

[Angelfish]

Alrighty, thank you! :)

[Arreis]

I like the pace when you read this. But that last stanza really gets me. The totally acceptance reminds me of “The Kiss” painting by Klimt.

[Angelfish]

I will have to look this up

[shallimarRose]

Well I think its a very sweet love poem.. I love the title and the static electricity it implies.. Nice ending.. shallimarRose

[Angelfish]

Thank you :)

[shallimarRose]

youre welcome.